Homework

Good morning, Ben!^.^

Once again, thank you for doing your homework.^.^

I also appreciate your effort in doing your homework and for expressing your ideas.

You are a man of ideas but still needs to enhance your sentence patterns to enhance your skill.

I hope you can find time to compare the sentences you wrote and I wrote to see the correction.

If you have certain questions about them, feel free to ask me!^.^

Have a wonderful day, Ben!^.^

~~Teacher Erine~~

I absolutely agree that teenager must be working.

>>I absolutely agree that a teenager must work.

I think that human\'s personality and character was determined already when they was in youth from their parents and DNA.

>>I think that the human\'s personality and character are determined already when they are still young from and from their parent\'s DNA.

Teenager can distinguish what is wrong and false or how they can focus on the study, if they have got regular education course.

>>A teenager can distinguish what is wrong and right or how they can focus on studies if they have got a regular education course.

Even, amongst adult, lots of people couldn\'t follow the society rule or universal morals.

>>Amongst adults, a lot of people couldn\'t even follow the society\'s rule or the universal morals.
Difference between teenager and adult is just an experience.

>>The difference between a teenager and an adult is just experience.

Teenagers are fragile because they haven\'t had time and haven\'t being used to take it.

>>Teenagers are fragile because they haven\'t had time and haven\'t used to take it.

That is why having job of teenagers should be done.

>>That is why having a job for teenagers should be done.

It would improve their ability such as making good judgement, growing social skill and sense of independence by earning money on their own. 

>>It would improve their abilities such as making good judgment, growing their social skills and their sense of independence by earning money on their own.
 But, above all, adult must feel responsible that they can influence many ways of thinking and give the love and concern to teenager.

>>But above all, an adult must feel responsible that they can influence many ideas and give/show love and concern to teenager.

We don\'t need to donate or express an excessive kindness.

>>We don\'t need to donate or express excessive kindness.

We just give a fair compensation for them.
>>We just need a fair compensation/treatment to them.
P.s = I always appreciate your feedback and compliment.

>>P.S. I always appreciate your feedback and compliments.