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Happy Friday! Finaaly, my husband finished his important work so I'm happy.
I didn't have a class in this morning. I went to the park with my husband. We wanted to came back early but spring's morning was too nice to do that. I missed your voice at that time. There was inner conflict but I choosed park's beautiful mood. Sorry. Have a nice weekend. See you on Monday.
Would you want to have your own clone? Why or why not?
I don't want to have my own clone. I think it'll be scary. Can they really make me, my soul? I think it is impossible. Although, the appearance is similar to me, not my soul. Actually the clone is not me. Medical technology is important so clone is great technique. However, I don't want to human cloning. What do man control life! By the way, there was big accident in my country so many people lost their family. If it helps, I want to give them their family even if it is clone. Thank you.
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Hello there Ms. [Name]!
Happy Friday evening to you!
I do understand if you were not able to have our class.
The spring season is a good time to walk outside and that you were with your husband so I guess that was your husband\'s time for you.
I hope that you had fun this morning.
Well, having clones for those families who lost their love ones would also be okay I guess.
But nothing still compares to the real one.
And when we say clone, it means like it has the same appearance like the original. But there are still some differences and one of these is the feelings or emotions, I guess. Your soul if you want to say that.
I have watch this movie and the title is \"The Island.\"
It was directed by Michael Bay, starring Ewan McGregor and Scarlet Johansson.
The plot is about people living in an isolated and enclosed compound. It turns out that these people living in that are clones who are used for the wealthy people in the outside world.
So these wealthy have insured a clone of there own.
This movie is quite interesting actually.
Hope you can watch it one day.
Enjoy your weekend Ms. [Name] and see you again on Monday!
Take care!
Always, Kathrine ^^
Happy Friday!
>> correct!
Finaaly, my husband finished his important work so I\'m happy.
>> corerct! (Finally,.... )I didn\'t have a class in this morning. >> I didn\'t have a class this morning.
I went to the park with my husband.
>> correct!
We wanted to came back early but spring\'s morning was too nice to do that.
>> We wanted to go back homr early but the morning during the spring season was too nice to walk around.
I missed your voice at that time. >> correct!
There was inner conflict but I choosed park\'s beautiful mood.
>> There was an inner conflict but I choose the park\'s beautiful mood.
Sorry. Have a nice weekend. See you on Monday. >> correct!
Would you want to have your own clone? Why or why not? I don\'t want to have my own clone. >> correct!
I think it\'ll be scary.
>> correct!
Can they really make me, my soul? >> correct!
I think it is impossible. >> correct!
Although, the appearance is similar to me, not my soul.
>> Although the appearance is similar to me but not my soul.
Actually the clone is not me.
>> correct!
Medical technology is important so clone is great technique. >> Medical technology is important so the clone is a great technique.
However, I don\'t want to human cloning. >> However, I don\'t want to have a human cloning.
What do man control life!
>> Why do man wants to control life?
By the way, there was big accident in my country so many people lost their family.>> correct!
If it helps, I want to give them their family even if it is clone. Thank you. >> If it can help, I want to give them back their family members, even if it is a clone. Thank you.
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