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2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelse. Even It's some raining but good today for go to shopping or go to picnic. I had study all of weekend for my mid term exam, so i forgor doing my homework. My girlfriend hope that will go to study in Philippine. If you could recommend to me, what do you think for good study area in philippine? Today's topic is "What are some reasons why privacy is important for you?" These day, there are a lot of fraud using personal informations. This privacy fraud give us that monetary damages, as well as to a cause mental damage to people. therefore, the privacy of each care about. See you on Monday morning. Good night~

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points. See you tomorrow^^ Have a great day abd take care^^ T.Chelsea Hi Chelse.>> Hi Chelsea.Even It\'s some raining but good today for go to shopping or go to picnic. >> Even though it\'s raining, today is still a good day to go shopping or go on a picnic.I had study all of weekend for my mid term exam, so i forgor doing my homework.>> I had to study all weekend for my midterm exam, so I forgot to do my homework.My girlfriend hope that will go to study in Philippine.>> My girlfriend wants to study in the Philippines.If you could recommend to me, what do you think for good study area in philippine?>> Can you recommend a good city in the Philippines to study English?Today\'s topic is \"What are some reasons why privacy is important for you?\">> CORRECT^^These day, there are a lot of fraud using personal informations.>> These days, there are a lot of people who use a diffirent personal information.This privacy fraud give us that monetary damages, as well as to a cause mental damage to people. therefore, the privacy of each care about. >> Fraud gives us montary damages, it can also cause mental damages to people. Therefore, the privacy is really important.See you on Monday morning. Good night~ >> CORRECT^^

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