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2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

It is my bibble. I always read some word in bibble every day. When I read it, I feel comfortable and happiness. However when I hate someone, Jesus told me you also were giluty. Bibble is my road, truth and live. In the world like evil, it protect me that I don't lose a faith and heart of love with neighvor.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for expressing your thoughts. Anyway, I am very happy to know that. Well then, please go over the corrections. See you! ~T. Jessie~ It is my bibble. >> It is my bible. I always read some word in bibble every day. >> I always read my bible every day. When I read it, I feel comfortable and happiness. >> When I read it, I feel comfortable and happy. However when I hate someone, Jesus told me you also were giluty. >> However when I hate someone, Jesus told me that I am also guilty.Bibble is my road, truth and live. >> Bible is my road, truth and life. In the world like evil, it protect me that I don\'t lose a faith and heart of love with neighvor.>> In this evil world, it protects me from losing faith and love for neighbors.

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