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2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Thank you for your recommendation about movie, The Island. I don't like the genre, SF but my husband really like it. I'd like to watch it with him. I heard the story is about human clone so this is expecting. How different would life be if we all spoke the same language? People use different language because of evil in the Bible. Therefore many crimes will occur such as drug, gambling and so on. As you know everything has its pros and cons. However, I think good side when we all spoke the same language. We can travel freely all around world without travel agency. (Then they loat their job. It's sad.) We can make a lot of friends who are living different country. We will easily influenced each other. Actually, they will keep each life style because of natural environment but they can change for trade. Of course, transportation have to assist it. How to do English teacher? Hahaha. Many jobs will disappear and others will come out. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Great Monday noon Ms. [Name]!

Well, how I wish that there will be  unification when there is only on language in the world.

But of course, it is not that exciting anymore since we do not need to learn other foreign languages.

Anyway, thanks for your time and see you again tomorrow.

Enjoy the rest of the day!


Always,

Kathrine ^^



Thank you for your recommendation about movie, The Island.

>> Thank you for your recommendation about the movie, The Island.

I don\'t like the genre, SF but my husband really like it.

>> I don\'t like SF as a movie genre but my husband likes it.

I\'d like to watch it with him.

>> correct!

I heard the story is about human clone so this is expecting.
>> I heard that the story is about human clone so I am expecting it a lot. 


 How different would life be if we all spoke the same language?


 People use different language because of evil in the Bible.

>> People use different languages because of the evil in the Bible.

Therefore many crimes will occur such as drug, gambling and so on.

>> correct!

As you know everything has its pros and cons.

>> correct!

However, I think good side when we all spoke the same language.

>> However, I think that there is still a good side when we speak the same language.

We can travel freely all around world without travel agency.

>> We can travel freely all around world without a travel agency.

 (Then they loat their job. It\'s sad.)

>> Then they will loathe their job. It\'s just sad.)

We can make a lot of friends who are living different country.

>> We can make a lot of friends who are living in different countries.

We will easily influenced each other.

>> correct!

Actually, they will keep each life style because of natural environment but they can change for trade.

>> Actually, they will keep each life style because if the natural environment but they can change it for a trade.

Of course, transportation have to assist it.

>> Of course, transportation has to assist it.

How to do English teacher? Hahaha.

>> How about the English teacher? Hahaha.

Many jobs will disappear and others will come out. Thank you.

>> correct!

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