Homework.

Good morning, Ben!^^

The sentences that you are doing are impressive.

You are aware of the sentence patterns now but I think you also have to be aware of your words and capitalization.

There were times that your words can confuse the meaning or your sentence.

For example: We also have well-stabilized public peace amongst all over the world with Japan, You are able to feel secure living in here. 

Try to double check the sentences first so that you can see if it is clear enough.

See you soon!^.^

~~Teacher Erine~~

I live in Seoul which is the capital of South Korea.

>>I live in Seoul, which is the capital of South Korea.(*Be aware of the comma. It is considered as a Type 2 relative clause.)

Seoul is only a few biggest city which over 10 millions people are living in, so called metropolitan.

>>Seoul is only one of the biggest cities where over 10 million people are living in. It is also called Metropolitan.

The most convenient thing is that hundreds of store being opened overnight.

>>The most convenient thing is that hundreds of stores are open overnight.

So, you can easily buy a goods anywhere, anytime when you want to.

>>So you can easily buy goods anywhere anytime you want to.

We also have well-stabilized public peace amongst all over the world with Japan, You are able to feel secure living in here. 

>>(*This one is a bit confusing for me. But I hope I was able to catch the thought that you want to impart.)

>>We also have a well-stabilized public peace, with Japan, amongst the other countries. You will feel secured living here.
Seoul public transport system is most advanced than any other place.

>>Seoul public transportation system is the most advanced system.

You can get a bus or tube not far away from your accommodation wherever you live.

>>You can get a bus or tube not far away from your accommodation or wherever you live.
You can see the traditional street or palace the center of the Seoul.

>>You can see the traditional street of palace at the center of Seoul.
But, Weakness of Seoul is such a high-priced city.

>>But, the weakness of the city/the negative point about the city is it is a such a high-priced city.

Except transportation fee and heating bills

>>Except for the transportation fee and heating bills.
Especially real estate price is really expensive.

>>Especially, the real estate price is very expensive.

Having and fostering your own pet could be hard because a lot of korean don\'t consider animal as a part of real family component like western country because of influence of Confucianism.

>>Having and fostering your own pet could be hard because a lot of Koreans don\'t consider animal as part of the real family like the western country do because of the influence of Confucianism.