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I like Seoul very much.
Mostly, I like Coex aquarium.
There are 3600type of fish.
I always go there when I go to Seoul.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom!
Happy Monday! It\'s really nice to start the week receiving a composition from you.
Oh! I want to visit that place. I think you have a lot of pictures there, am I right?
Is it expensive to go to that place? There are a lot of advantages when you get exposed to a big aquarium like that.
Tell me about your experiences in class.
See you!Teacher Nina
I like Seoul very much.
>> I really like Seoul. Mostly, I like Coex aquarium.
>> I mostly like Coex aquarium.
>> OR: I like Coex aquarium which is found in the capital city of Korea. There are 3600type of fish.
>> There are 3,600 types of fishes.
>> OR: There are three thousand six hundred types of fishes. I always go there when I go to Seoul.
>> I always visit that place when I go to Seoul.
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