Homework.

2014-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. Good evening. Here are heavy raining now. summer is comming soon. I'm studying more for my exam because tomorrow's test is so difficult. Anyway my homework's topic is "Is religion important to you? Why?" Actually I don't have any religion. so I don't know this topic. but some my friends who have religion told me "my most important thing is religion. because the God is always listening to my pray. The God is my most important thing." I believe existence of God. but I don't have religion. I don't know why I don't have religion. It is just. Do you have any religion? What did you feel about that religion? Good night. See you tomorrow. Bye ~ :)

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Hi there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. Yes, I have a religion. I\'m a catholic. Anglican to be exact. I feel good about my religion. For me, I think it\'s okay not to have religion as long as you believe in GOD but nothing\'s wrong if you try some religion. You can pray wherever you are and I beleive that GOD will always be there to listen to you^^ Let\'s talk more about this in our class^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea. Good evening.>> CORRECT^^Here are heavy raining now. >> It\'s raining heavily right now. summer is comming soon. >> Summer is approaching.I\'m studying more for my exam because tomorrow\'s test is so difficult.>> CORRECT^^Anyway my homework\'s topic is \"Is religion important to you? Why?\">> CORRECT^^Actually I don\'t have any religion. so I don\'t know this topic. but some my friends who have religion told me \"my most important thing is religion. because the God is always listening to my pray. The God is my most important thing.\">> Actually , I don\'t have any religion, so I don\'t have any idea about this topics. But some of friends who have religion once told me that the most important this is religion because GOD is always listening to my prayers. And GOD is the most important thing.I believe existence of God. but I don\'t have religion. I don\'t know why I don\'t have religion. It is just.>> I beleive that GOD exists but  don\'t have religion. I don\'t know why I don\'t have a religion. It\'s just is.Do you have any religion? >> CORRECT^^ What did you feel about that religion?>> What do you feel about that religion?Good night. See you tomorrow. Bye ~ :) >> CORRECT^^

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