Homework

2014.28 Is religion important to you? Why? The religion is the most important to me. I am a Christian. God always lives together with me. I have felt so many time in my life. When I had a happy or unhappy periods, I prayed God. Also I think that I cannot live without God. Because, it was very lonely time either good or bad situations when I didn't believe him. God gives me the energy to live in the world. Nowadays, I awake the essence of the daily work. The work is one of the present by God. Before I knew this nature, I never understand why God gives the work to human. Because, a lot of my coworkers, neighborhoods and friends told me that I will retire if I will earn the big money and the work makes me hard time. But, when I red the genesis in the bible, I understanded why the work is important thing in the human throughout the progress of making the world by God. He created the world during the 6 days and he took a rest one day.

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Is religion important to you? Why?

The religion is the most important to me.

>> Religion is the most important for me.

I am a Christian.

>> CORRECT^^

God always lives together with me.

>> CORRECT^^

I have felt so many time in my life.

>> I have felt it so many time in my life.

When I had a happy or unhappy periods, I prayed God.

>> When I\'m happy or sad, I always pray to God.

Also I think that I cannot live without God. Because, it was very lonely time either good or bad situations when I didn\'t believe him.

>> Also, I think I cannot live without GOD because it will be a very lonely time whether it\'s good or bad situation when I don\'t believe him.

God gives me the energy to live in the world. 

>>GOD gives me energy to live in this world.

Nowadays, I awake the essence of the daily work.

>> Nowadays, I\'m awake with the essence of my daily work.

The work is one of the present by God.

>> This work is one the presents from God.

Before I knew this nature, I never understand why God gives the work to human. Because, a lot of my coworkers, neighborhoods and friends told me that I will retire if I will earn the big money and the work makes me hard time.

>> Before I knew this, I never understand why God gives work to human because a lot of my co-workers, neighbors, and friends told me that I will retire if I will earn a lot of money and work makes gives me hard time.

But, when I red the genesis in the bible, I understanded why the work is important thing in the human throughout the progress of making the world by God.

>> But when I read genesis in the bible, I understood why work is important to human throughout the progress of making the world by GOD.

He created the world during the 6 days and he took a rest one day.

>> He created the world for 6 days and he took a rest just for one day.