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2014-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

1) When begins the race? - When do the race begin? 2) Sell you fish? - Do you sell fish? 3) Who does the trumpet play? - Who does the trumpet play? 4) Where flew the plane? - Where did the plane fly? 5) Do you have got a brother? - Do you have a brother? 6) Plays Mike volleyball? - Does Mike play volleyball? 7) Can the man the car drive? - Can the man drive the car? 8) Why wrote you this letter? - Why did you write this letter? 9) Do you can remember her name? - Can you remember her name? 10) Think you not that it's time to go? - Don' you think that it's time to go? It's rainy so I'm very cold. Some people wear a half-sleeve shirt. Of course, I did't put it on because I'm a sensitive to cold. I have a sore throat. This symptom was from coming flu. I'm worried. I'm often drinking some hot water. Take care of your health. Thank you. See you again on Wendesday.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]! 
Oh my, that is really the start of having colds and a flu. 
Be more careful 
You take care of your health. 
It is not easy to get sick. 
Take care and get well soon. 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

1) When begins the race? - When do the race begin?
>>  When does the race begin?
2) Sell you fish? - Do you sell fish?
>>  correct!
3) Who does the trumpet play? - Who does the trumpet play?
>>   Who plays the trumpet?
4) Where flew the plane? - Where did the plane fly?
>>  Who flew the plane?
5) Do you have got a brother? - Do you have a brother?
>>  correct! 
>> or: Have you got a brother?
6) Plays Mike volleyball? - Does Mike play volleyball?
>>  correct! 
7) Can the man the car drive? - Can the man drive the car?
>>  correct! 
8) Why wrote you this letter? - Why did you write this letter?
>>  correct! 
9) Do you can remember her name? - Can you remember her name? 
>>  correct! 
10) Think you not that it\'s time to go? - Don\' you think that it\'s time to go?
>>  correct! 
It\'s rainy so I\'m very cold. 
>>  correct! 
Some people wear a half-sleeve shirt. 
>>  Some people  are wearing a half-sleeve shirt. 
Of course, I did\'t put it on because I\'m a sensitive to cold. 
>>  correct! 
I have a sore throat. 
>>  correct! 
This symptom was from coming flu. 
>>  This is symptom of having a flu. 
I\'m worried. 
>>  correct! 
I\'m often drinking some hot water. 
>>  correct! 
Take care of your health. 
>>  correct! 
Thank you. 
>>  correct! 
See you again on Wendesday.
>>  correct! 

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