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2014-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I want to go to Palawan. Because, there are on a large scale corals. I'll go there when I'm on Honeymoon.^^

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Hi there handsome TOM! Oh! Your choice is really great! Palawan is one of the best places you can visit in the Philippines.You will be able to see a lot of corals, you can also go to the Underground River. I am sure that you will have a great time there. A lot of tourists visit that place for relaxation. You can check the place on the internet. See you in class.Have a fun day! Teacher Nina   I want to go to Palawan. >> Correct >> OR: I want to travel to Palawan. Because, there are on a large scale corals. >> Because there are large scale corals there.I\'ll go there when I\'m on Honeymoon.^^ >> I\'ll go there for my honeymoon.

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