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I want to go to Palawan.
Because, there are on a large scale corals.
I'll go there when I'm on Honeymoon.^^
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Hi there handsome TOM!
Oh! Your choice is really great!
Palawan is one of the best places you can visit in the Philippines.You will be able to see a lot of corals, you can also go to the Underground River.
I am sure that you will have a great time there.
A lot of tourists visit that place for relaxation.
You can check the place on the internet. See you in class.Have a fun day! Teacher Nina
I want to go to Palawan.
>> Correct
>> OR: I want to travel to Palawan. Because, there are on a large scale corals.
>> Because there are large scale corals there.I\'ll go there when I\'m on Honeymoon.^^
>> I\'ll go there for my honeymoon.
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