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2014-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Hi!!! How do you do today? When i was a student, my favorite subject is mathematics. Frankly, Other subjects should memorize all field related to it. But, if the Math have to memorize several formual, the problem can solve. Therefore, I thought it has to study less hard than others. It is difficult for me to learn other country's language. Because of that reason, Math is my best subject. After i grew up, Math wasn't used well in my life. Nowdays, I didn't have a chance to use it. it is being clearly used in our life, but i don't know it well. I am sorry. I don't have a enough time. I'm going to have to finish my homework. Bye!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Jehee!

Happy Tuesday!

 

Are you sure with your composition?

Is Mathematics really your favorite subject?

 

I am really shocked.

It is also my favorite subject.

Frankly speaking, I am a Math teacher.

I agree that it seems that it is easier to study than the other subjects.

We only need to know several formulas, and we can already solve some problems related to Math.

 

We also used Math in our daily life.

We need to count everyday.

For engineers and architects, they need to used Mathematics to do their work well.

The can make good building and other things using the said subject.

 

Anyway, that is for now!

Don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.

You did great in your homework!

Good job!

Keep it up!

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Hi!!!

How do you do today?

When i was a student, my favorite subject is mathematics.
>> When I was a student, my favorite subject was Mathematics.
Frankly, Other subjects should memorize all field related to it.
>> Frankly, in other subjects, students should memorize all fields related to them.

>> OR: Frankly speaking, ...
But, if the Math have to memorize several formual, the problem can solve.
>> However, in Math, we have to memorize several formulas, and the problems can be solved.
Therefore, I thought it has to study less hard than others.
>> Therefore, I thought it has to be studied less harder than the others.

>> OR: Therefore, I thought it has to be studied less difficultly than the others.
It is difficult for me to learn other country\'s language.
>> CORRECT!
Because of that reason, Math is my best subject.
>> CORRECT!
After i grew up, Math wasn\'t used well in my life.
>> After I grew up, Math isn\'t used well in my life.
Nowdays, I didn\'t have a chance to use it.
>> CORRECT!
it is being clearly used in our life, but i don\'t know it well.
>> It is clearly being used in our lives, but I don\'t know it well.
I am sorry.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t have a enough time.
>> I don\'t have enough time.
I\'m going to have to finish my homework.
>> I\'m have to finish my homework.
Bye!!!

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