Homework

Hi [이름],

I hope that you feel better now after a long day day. It is really nice of you to answer our homework every day even if you are very tired. Nice job!!!!

Talk with you later.

T, Jeny

Whew... Today was really tough day.

>>Whew... Today was really a tough day.
After this class, I went to listen to the other class during the day.

>>After this class, I listened to the other classes for the whole day.

And then I had a student council meeting and just came back to my room after excising.

>>And then, I had a student council meeting and just came back to my room after excersing.
I was absoultely tired up.

>>I was absolutely tired.

 I need to go to sleep after doing this homework for tomorrow.

>>correct
Good night!

>>correct

And thanks for your advice.

>>correct
I will keep in mind! :)

>>I will keep that in mind.

<Homework>
My opinion is that television ad has primarily negative effects on viewers.

>>My opinion is that television ads primarily have negative effects on viewers.

 Because there are much feigned information in the ads.

>>Because there are many feigned information on the ads.

 Advertising producers usually exaggerate their customer\'s products and inform fabrications for their profits.

>>Advertising producers usually exaggerate their products and they fabricate their profits.

This is why I think television ads has mainly negative effects.

>>That is why, I think television ads mainly have negative effects.