Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Well, I appreciate that you are enjoying and having fun studying English at present.
As what you have said it is an investment so you have to work hard for it.
And do not worry since I am here to help you with that.
Thanks a bunch!
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Today is last day of April.
>> Today is the last day of April.
This month was not easy because there were many bad news.
>> correct!
I hope that we all will be happy on May.
>> I hope that we will be all happy in may.
Do you ever think studying English is a waste of time?
I have ever thought about this question for myself.
>> I have never thought about this question by myself.
This is because I spend many times and money on studying English.
>> correct!
Of course, I know it is not enough. Hahaha.
>> correct!
That remind me that parents make thier kids studying Enlgish.
>> That reminds me that parents want their kids to study English.
I like reading so I want to read a lot of books.
>> correct!
Perhaps it can be excuse.
>> Perhaps it can be an excuse.
I need a plan.
>> correct!
I have to decide what I\'ll doing and when.
>> I( have to decide what I will be doing and when I am going to do it.
When I study English I think a reward.
>> When I study English, I think of it as a reward.
Therefore it is a investment for my future.
>> correct!
I\'d like to go to the USA for free.
>> I\'d like to go to the US for free.
Furthermore, I am expected something more. kkk.
>> correct!
However, I will enjoy studying English in the here and now. Thank you.
>> However, I will enjoy studying English here at present. Thank you.
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