Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
Today's my topic is "Five years from now, what do you think would be the improvements in your career?"
Today's topic is exciting because I consider my career that how can i improve it.
In five years from now, I hope that will get a master degree of management in abroad and get a job in America head office. So I want to live happiness with my future wife and family.
To do this, I must have to graduate with good grade in college and enter a graduate school in another country.
Actually I'm happy that I can learn something. kkk
Have a nice day. See you tomorrow
Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I\'m pretty sure you\'ll be able to achieve those!
You are determine on the things you do!
Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
See you later!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^Today\'s my topic is \"Five years from now, what do you think would be the improvements in your career?\">> Today\'s topic is \"Five years from now, what do you think would be the improvements in your career?\"Today\'s topic is exciting because I consider my career that how can i improve it.>> Today\'s topic is exciting because I am considering things on how I can improve me career.In five years from now, I hope that will get a master degree of management in abroad and get a job in America head office. So I want to live happiness with my future wife and family.>> Five years from now, I hope that I will have a master\'s degree in management in another country and get a job in head office in America. So I want to live happy wih my future wife and family.To do this, I must have to graduate with good grade in college and enter a graduate school in another country.>> To achieve this, I must graduate with good grades in college and enter a graduate school in another country.Actually I\'m happy that I can learn something. kkk>> CORRECT^^Have a nice day. See you tomorrowBye~
>> CORRECT^^
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