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2014-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi there. I'm doing my second homework today. today's essay topic is "If your friend were doing something dangerous or illegal would you tell their parents? Why?" I will not tell anything to their parents. because I trust my friend choice everytime, even though that is dangerous thing or illegal thing. But if he chose a wrong way in his life, I will tell him some advice as a friend. However the responsible that he did a wrong after is him. ---- We have the "off day" until May 6th from tomorrow. Wow It is GOD's gift!! how can i have enjoy our holiday more? Anyway see you tomorrow. Bye Chelsea.

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Hi there again^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I agree with you, you should not tell anything to our friend\'s parents because I think it is not our place say anything but if our friend is doing something dangerous, we should give them some advice and if they won\'t listen to us then I think that would be the time for us to talk to their parents. Anyway, let\'s talk more about this in our class^^ Yeah! I envy you! See you later^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi there. >> CORRECT^^ I\'m doing my second homework today. >> CORRECT^^today\'s essay topic is \"If your friend were doing something dangerous or illegal would you tell their parents? Why?\">> Today\'s topic is \"If your friend were doing something dangerous or illegal would you tell their parents? Why?\"I will not tell anything to their parents. because I trust my friend choice everytime, even though that is dangerous thing or illegal thing.>> I will not tell anything to their parents because I trust my friend\'s choice, even though it\'s dangerous or illegal.But if he chose a wrong way in his life, I will tell him some advice as a friend. >> But if he chose a wrong path in his life, I would give him some advice as a friend.However the responsible that he did a wrong after is him.>> Do you mean, \"However, he is stll responsible on what he did.\"----We have the \"off day\" until May 6th from tomorrow. >> We have a day off starting tomorrow until ay 6.Wow It is GOD\'s gift!! >> Wow, it\'s a gift from GOD.how can i have enjoy our holiday more?>> How can I enjoy our holiday more?Anyway see you tomorrow. Bye Chelsea. >> CORRECT^^

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