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2014-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Directions: Write the following paragraphs, inserting a, an, and the where needed. A horse knows when he is going to a race. How does he know? His breakfast was scanty. (He is angry about that.) He does not have a saddle on his back. He is being led, not ridden, to grandstand. He is led under grandstand into unusual, special stall. A horse is nervous. Sometimes he does not know what to do when starting gate flies open and a track is before him. If he does not begin to run instantly, other horses are already ahead of him. During a race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he [이름] try to pass him. Sometimes a jockey holds him back to save his energy for last stretch. Eventually a horse gets to run as fast as he can. a exercise boy, watching owner's favorite jockey riding horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing. Secretly, he is planning for day when he [이름] be a jockey himself, and his horse [이름] be first to cross finish line.

강사 첨삭

I am so exciting for you Sir [이름]!

First, you [이름] be having your swimming class tomorrow. Good luck

Second, your graduation is fast approaching. Yehey!

This calls for a celebration!

But of course, before you graduate, you really need to finish your thesis.

I know it\'s very difficult but I know that you can do that.

 

Anyway, thank you so much again for doing your homework.

Kindly go over the correction made below.

Thank you.

 

See you again in class !

Good night

Teacher Janice

 

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Directions: Write the following paragraphs, inserting a, an, and the where needed.

A horse knows when he is going to a race. How does he know?

>> A horse knows when he is going to race. How does he know?

His breakfast was scanty. (He is angry about that.)

>> Correct

He does not have a saddle on his back.

>> Correct

He is being led, not ridden, to grandstand.

>> Correct

He is led under grandstand into unusual, special stall.

>> He is led under grandstand into an unusual, special stall.

A horse is nervous.

>> The horse is nervous.

Sometimes he does not know what to do when starting gate flies open and a track is before him.

>> Sometime he does not know what to do when the starting gate flies open and the track is before him.

If he does not begin to run instantly, other horses are already ahead of him.

>> Correct

During a race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he [이름] try to pass him.

>> During the race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he [이름] try to pass him.

Sometimes a jockey holds him back to save his energy for last stretch.

>> Sometimes the jockey holds him back to save his energy for the last stretch.

Eventually a horse gets to run as fast as he can. a exercise boy, watching owner\'s favorite jockey riding horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing.

>> Eventually the horse gets to run as fast as he can. The exercise boy, watching the owner\'s favorite jockey riding the horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing.

Secretly, he is planning for day when he [이름] be a jockey himself, and his horse [이름] be first to cross finish line.

>> Secretly, he is planning for the day when he [이름] be a jockey himself, and his horse [이름] be the first to cross the finish line.

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