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There are many popular destinations in my country.
For the Southest Asian, they usally go to Gang-won-do.
The people who live in northen province go to Pu-san.
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Hi Tom!
Thank you for sending your composition today.
I hope that you will have a great time today.
I really want to visit the famous places in your country.
Enjoy the rest of the day. See you!
Teacher Nina
There are many popular destinations in my country.
>> Correct
>> OR: There are many famous destinations in my country. For the Southest Asian, they usally go to Gang-won-do.
>> For Southeast Asian people, they usually go to Gang-won-do.The people who live in northen province go to Pu-san.
>> The people who live at the northern province go to Pu-san.
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