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2014-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There are many popular destinations in my country. For the Southest Asian, they usally go to Gang-won-do. The people who live in northen province go to Pu-san.

강사 첨삭

Hi Tom! Thank you for sending your composition today. I hope that you will have a great time today. I really want to visit the famous places in your country. Enjoy the rest of the day. See you! Teacher Nina   There are many popular destinations in my country. >> Correct >> OR: There are many famous destinations in my country.  For the Southest Asian, they usally go to Gang-won-do. >> For Southeast Asian people, they usually go to Gang-won-do.The people who live in northen province go to Pu-san. >> The people who live at the northern province go to Pu-san.

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