Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
It's so peaceful day. I wish everyday of front of me like today. kkk
Anyway today's topic is "What are some things that you need to consider when starting your own business?"
When I start own business, I must start with some notes of business such as financing, marketing, and partner.
I think that the most important thing is partner. I can't do everything myself in my business. Someday I need a truthful person who lead my business with me.
I think relationship is most difficult in community in Korea. :(
How do you think about relationship in Philippine?
See you tomorrow. Bye ~
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
I think when it comes to business, it\'s really difficult to trust someone.
But nowadays, it\'s really difficult to trust someone in any kind of relationship.
Let\'s talk more about this in our class^^
Have a great day and take care^^
Talk to you on Wednesday!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^It\'s so peaceful day.
>> It\'s a peaceful day.
I wish everyday of front of me like today. kkk>> I wish every day is like this. Kkk.Anyway today\'s topic is \"What are some things that you need to consider when starting your own business?\">> CORRECT^^When I start own business, I must start with some notes of business such as financing, marketing, and partner.
>> If I\'m going to start my own business, I will start it with some notes about business such as financing, markerting and a partner.I think that the most important thing is partner.
>> I think that the most important thing is having a partner.
I can\'t do everything myself in my business.
>> I can\'t do everything on my own in my business.
Someday I need a truthful person who lead my business with me.>> Someday, I need a person who I can trust to lead the business with me.I think relationship is most difficult in community in Korea. :( >> I think relationship is difficult in Korea. :(How do you think about relationship in Philippine? >> What about in the Philippines?See you tomorrow. Bye ~
>> CORRECT^^
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