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2014-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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My favorite book is essay. I like essay better than fiction. I'm reading a essay book these days that the auhor is Kim Nam Joh who is a universty professor. The book tittle is because of ill youth. When I need a wisdom, I feel like I need to read a essay book. And I like movie of every kind. But my most favorite movie is soft movie. Recently we can see many sensational scene in movie or TV. I think It is bad for our soul. The world is going to more become a corruption. We have to protect our mind from evil.

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Hi there Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sharing this to me. You are getting better and better in writing your compositions. Keep it up! Reading essays is also one way for you to improve your writing skills. Good job! See you later! ~T. Jessie~ My favorite book is essay. >> My favorite book is entitled \" Because of Ill Youth.\" OR>> I like reading essays. I like essay better than fiction. >> Correct! I\'m reading a essay book these days that the auhor is Kim Nam Joh who is a universty professor. >> I\'m reading an essay book these days that the auhor is Kim Nam Joh who is a universty professor. The book tittle is because of ill youth. >> The book\'s title is \" Because of Ill Youth\" When I need a wisdom, I feel like I need to read a essay book. >> When I need wisdom, I feel like I need to read an essay. OR>>  When I need wisdom, I feel like I need to read it.And I like movie of every kind. >> And I like every kind of movie. But my most favorite movie is soft movie. >> But my favorite is mellow movies. Recently we can see many sensational scene in movie or TV. >> Recently, we can see many sensational scenes in movie or TV. I think It is bad for our soul. >> I think it is bad for our soul. The world is going to more become a corruption. >> The world is going to be more corrupt. We have to protect our mind from evil. >> Correct!

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