Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you were the world's best at something, what would you like to be best at?
I want to be a professional teacher so I'd like to be best at teaching. However, I think it is not easy as an elementary school teacher. This is because we have to many subjects such as music, art, physical education and so on. Therefore a lot fo teachers find thier field of specializaton. For example, there are cooperative learning, science, gifted education and others. In my case, I have an interest in many area. It is problem. hahaha. Thesedays I am concentrating in studing English. I know there are a lot of great English teachers in the world. I just want to be happy teacher with my students. Um if I have a dream, I want to be a steadyseller writher. I'd like to be a best at writing a book. hahaha. Thank you. Have a nice holiday. See you on happy Wednesday.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [Name]!
It is finally the start of a loooong holiday for us.
I am really looking for it and I know you are too.
Well, I really do hope that you would become the person whom you want to be best at someday or in the near future.
Why not? It could always be possible as long as you are determined to do it.
I wish you luck then.
I just wish that you will have an enjoyable holiday.
Enjoy your free time !
Take care and see you again next week.
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I want to be a professional teacher so I\'d like to be best at teaching.
>> I want to be a professional teacher so I\'d like to be the best at teaching.
However, I think it is not easy as an elementary school teacher.
>> However, I think it is not easy to be an elementary school teacher.
This is because we have to many subjects such as music, art, physical education and so on.
>> correct!
Therefore a lot fo teachers find thier field of specializaton.
>> Therefore a lot of teachers who are finding their field of specialization.
For example, there are cooperative learning, science, gifted education and others.
>> correct!
In my case, I have an interest in many area.
>> In my case, I have an interest in many areas.
It is problem. hahaha. \\
>> It is a problem. hahaha
Thesedays I am concentrating in studing English.
>> These days, I\'m concentrating in studying English.
I know there are a lot of great English teachers in the world.
>> correct!
I just want to be happy teacher with my students.
>> correct!
Um if I have a dream, I want to be a steadyseller writher.
>> Uhm, if I have a dream, I want to be a best selling writer.
I\'d like to be a best at writing a book. hahaha.
>> I\'d like to be the best in writing books. hahaha
Thank you.
>> correct!
Have a nice holiday.
>> correct!
See you on happy Wednesday.
>> See you on Wednesday!
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