Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi chelsea. Good evening today.
Did you have a good holidays?
We will have to return to our daily. :( I'm crying.
Anyway this topic is "What are the advantages of being single?"
I think the advantages of being single is time.
Type of time varies, such as time of self-development, and rest time of daily.
What's more, the single people can have a lot of time of self-development without other people focus on.
Of coursle that is my think of individual.
Recently i guess i have some slump.
I'm sad because my english skill is not developing quickly. :(
Fighting ~
Anyway see you tomorrow.
Bye good night Chelsea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
I agree with you! Time is the biggest advantage to single people.
Anyway, you are improving. English is our second language, so it will never be easy and fast to improve.
Just be patient and I know for sure you\'ll improve!
See you tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Hi chelsea.
>> Hi Chelsea.
Good evening today.
>> CORRECT^^Did you have a good holidays?
>> Did you have a good holiday?We will have to return to our daily. :( I\'m crying.>> We have to go ack to our daily routine. :( I\'m crying.Anyway this topic is \"What are the advantages of being single?\">> Anyway, today\'s topic is \"What are the advantages of being single?\"I think the advantages of being single is time.>> I think the andvantage of being single is having time.Type of time varies, such as time of self-development, and rest time of daily.
>> The type of time varies, such as time for self-development and rest time.What\'s more, the single people can have a lot of time of self-development without other people focus on.>> Single people can have a lot of time for self-development without focusing to other people.Of coursle that is my think of individual.
>> Of course that\'s my opinion as an individual.Recently i guess i have some slump.
>> Recently, I guess I have some slumps.I\'m sad because my english skill is not developing quickly. :(>> I\'m sad because my English skills are not improving so fast. :(Fighting ~>> CORRECT^^Anyway see you tomorrow.
>> Anyway, see you tomorrow.Bye good night Chelsea.
>> Bye and good night Chelsea.
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