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Will you ever do all the things you want to do in life?
I'd like to have new dreams everyday and I want that my dream come true. When I was young, I thought that I can do everything. I heard many things from celebrities that your dream will come ture necessarily if you just have a great dream. Right, dream is very important. However, I think that the dream can change. It is not bad. Life is not simple so everyone has ups and downs in life such as disease, accident and so on. We are encounter with out of our work. We will be humble and concent to life. I can enjoy my life as much as possible. I'd like to go world travel and I want to write my book. It is one of my dreams. I believe it will come true. Now, it is important that I have a dream. I am not God so I don't know whether to do or not. But I still dream of that. People just live withouth knowing the future and so do I. Thank you. My thinking is not clear. I wonder that I will ever do.
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Great evening to you Ms. [Name]!
Fulfilling all the things that you want to do in your life would still be possible if you really want to do it.
As they always say, THINK POSITIVE.
But of course, it still depends on the person if he/she is going to continue achieving it.
And do not wonder about it anymore because basing from your answers you have a clear plan on what to do with your life and for your future.
So go for it and I wish you all the best.
Thanks for today!
Enjoy the rest of the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I\'d like to have new dreams everyday and I want that my dream come true.
>> I\'d like to have new dreams everyday and I want that my dreams will come true.
When I was young, I thought that I can do everything.
>> correct!
I heard many things from celebrities that your dream will come ture necessarily if you just have a great dream.
>> I heard many things from the celebrities that your dreams can come true necessarily if you just have a great dream.
Right, dream is very important.
>> correct!
However, I think that the dream can change.
>> correct!
It is not bad.
>> correct!
Life is not simple so everyone has ups and downs in life such as disease, accident and so on.
>> Life is not simple so everyone has ups and downs in life such as diseases, accidents, and so on.
We are encounter with out of our work.
>> We can encounter it in and out of work.
We will be humble and concent to life.
>> Then we will be humble and be concerned about our life.
I can enjoy my life as much as possible.
>> correct!
I\'d like to go world travel and I want to write my book.
>> I\'d like to travel the world and I want to write my own book.
It is one of my dreams.
>> correct!
I believe it will come true.
>> I believe that it will come true.
Now, it is important that I have a dream.
>> correct!
I am not God so I don\'t know whether to do or not.
>> I am not God so I don\'t know whether I will do or not.
But I still dream of that.
>> But I will still dream about that.
People just live withouth knowing the future and so do I.
>> correct! (without)
Thank you.
>> correct!
My thinking is not clear.
>> correct!
I wonder that I will ever do.
>> I wonder if I will ever do it.
>> or; I am wondering if I will be able to do it.
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