Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
It's rainning again here.
I'm almost feel summer but the rainy season is also coming in Korea.
Anyway, today's topic is "What do you think are some important things parents can do for teenagers?"
I think the existence of a parent just is blessing of teenagers. because the teenagers are a mirror of parent, so when the teenager was younger than now, there look and grow up at their's parent.
The teenagers without their parent didn't have teaching that when their doing wrong. so their's morality is incorrect not.
That is just my think and reality may be diffrent.
What do you think about it?
Goodnight Chelsea. See you tomorrow.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
For me, I think, yes, it is good to have parents to tell you what\'s wrong from right but that doesn\'t mean that those teenagers who don\'t have parents don\'t know what\'s wrong from right.
Let\'s talk more about this in our class^^
Have a great day!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea. >> CORRECT^^It\'s rainning again here.>> It\'s raining here again.I\'m almost feel summer but the rainy season is also coming in Korea.>> It\'s almost summer but rainy season is also approaching in Korea.Anyway, today\'s topic is \"What do you think are some important things parents can do for teenagers?\">> CORRECT^^I think the existence of a parent just is blessing of teenagers. because the teenagers are a mirror of parent, so when the teenager was younger than now, there look and grow up at their\'s parent.>> I think the existence of a parent is a blessing for teenagers because teenagers are the mirror of parents, so when teenagers are younger, they will look up to their parents.The teenagers without their parent didn\'t have teaching that when their doing wrong. so their\'s morality is incorrect not.>> Teenagers withou parents don\'t know what\'s wrong from right, so they don\'t have ethics.That is just my think and reality may be diffrent.>> That is just my opinion and reality might be different.What do you think about it?>> CORRECT^^Goodnight Chelsea. See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT^^Bye.
>> CORRECT^^
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