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2014-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Janice

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This is my script, but I didn't see the script while I was speaking^^ My first question: you can buy it for 500 dollors. Is it correct? Thank you always, Janice. I'm very lucky because you are my teacher^^ one day, if you come to my country, I could guide you^^ good night~ The most useful gadget I have is definitely my smart phone. It just doesn't offer the typical voice function, but it can also be used for various purposes. Using my smart phone, I can read ebooks, chat with my friends, search on the internet, and do the shopping. In addition, it is more than just a gadget. I always carry this little device in my pocket, and it controls my daily routine. If I lost my smart phone, my daily life could be easily distracted. But Even thoght the smart phone is essential to my life, I use it carefully not to addict to the electrical device. look forward On the basis of the rules for using articles discussed in the OWL file "Count and Noncount Nouns," which combinations of words below are permitted and which ones aren't? Put an X next to the incorrect combinations. 1. a table 2. these person x 3. this furniture 4. that assignment 5. a boy 6. the poetry 7. a difficulty x 8. a research 9. this eggs x 10. those argument x

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Wow! Thank you for that Sir [이름]! Me too, I am so lucky that you are my student. I\'ll count on you Sir [이름]. haha If I have enough money and decided to go to your country, you [이름] be my tour guide.   Anyway, when I was listening to your composition when we had our class, I was already amazed with the way you construct your sentences. Good job for that Sir [이름]!   Please take a look on the corrections made below.   See you tonight! Take care :) Teacher Janice   This is my script, but I didn\'t see the script while I was speaking^^ >> OR: This is my script and I didn\'t look at it while I was speaking. ^^My first question: you can buy it for 500 dollors. Is it correct? >> My first question is , You can buy it for 500 dollars. Is it correct?Thank you always, Janice. I\'m very lucky because you are my teacher^^ >> Thank you always Janice. I am very lucky because your are my teacher. ^^one day, if you come to my country, I could guide you^^ >> One day, if you [이름] come here in my country, I [이름] be your tour guide. ^^good night~ >> Good night. The most useful gadget I have is definitely my smart phone. >> Correct It just doesn\'t offer the typical voice function, but it can also be used for various purposes. >> OR: It doesn\'t have a good audio function but it can also be use for various purposes.Using my smart phone, I can read ebooks, chat with my friends, search on the internet, and do the shopping. >> With the use of my smart phone, I can read e-books, chat with my friends, search on the internet, and do online shopping.In addition, it is more than just a gadget. >> Correct I always carry this little device in my pocket, and it controls my daily routine. >> Correct If I lost my smart phone, my daily life could be easily distracted. >> Correct But Even thoght the smart phone is essential to my life, I use it carefully not to addict to the electrical device. >> But even though my smart phone is essential to my life, I use it carefully and not to be addicted to it.look forward >> Look forward.On the basis of the rules for using articles discussed in the OWL file \"Count and Noncount Nouns,\" which combinations of words below are permitted and which ones aren\'t? Put an X next to the incorrect combinations.1. a table>> Correct 2. these person x>> Correct 3. this furniture>> Correct 4. that assignment>> Correct 5. a boy>> Correct 6. the poetry>> Correct 7. a difficulty x>> a difficulty8. a research>> Correct 9. this eggs x>> Correct 10. those argument x >> Correct

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