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2014-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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My class room is in a building with three floor. My class room's below floor is a hair shop. And my class room have many apartments and schools around. Especially, a lot of private educational institute are there.ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ She was CRYING all day long. - intransitive 2. We SHOWED her the photo album.- transitive 3. The doctor ADVISED me to exercise regularly.-transitive 4. It WAS RAINING at that time.- intransitive 5. She LAUGHED at the joke.-intransitive 6. She GAVE a cookie to the child.-transitive 7. They SLEPT in the street.-intrannsitive 8. I ATE the cherries.-transitive 9. My father DOESN'T DRINK coffee. .-transitive 10. He always KEEPS his money in a wallet.-transitive ㅡㅡWe watched the city and we were shopping there. ㅡㅡwe did shopping there.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for writing about your classroom. You procided more information about it. ^^, You also did great in asnwering your homework. Good job! Keep it up Ms. [이름]! See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ My class room is in a building with three floor. >> My classroom is in a building with three floors. My class room\'s below floor is a hair shop. >> Below my classroom is a hair shop. And my class room have many apartments and schools around. >> And my classroom is sorrounded by many apartments and schools. Especially, a lot of private educational institute are there.ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ >> There are a lot of private educational institutes there. 1. She was CRYING all day long. - intransitive >> Correct! 2. We SHOWED her the photo album.- transitive >> Correct!3. The doctor ADVISED me to exercise regularly.-transitive >> Correct!4. It WAS RAINING at that time.- intransitive >> Correct! 5. She LAUGHED at the joke.-intransitive >> Correct!6. She GAVE a cookie to the child.-transitive >> Correct!7. They SLEPT in the street.-intransitive >> Correct!8. I ATE the cherries.-transitive >> Correct!9. My father DOESN\'T DRINK coffee. .-transitive >> Correct!10. He always KEEPS his money in a wallet.-transitive >> Correct!ㅡㅡWe watched the city and we were shopping there. >> We watched the city and we shopped there.ㅡㅡwe did shopping there. >> We shopped there.

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