Homework

Hello there, Ben!~

You really impressed me with the thoughts you shared!~

It seems like you are a man of a word.

You make sure that you explain your thoughts well and you are speaking

out all your experiences.

I am really amazed with the opinions however, the sentences have some

slips in grammar and especially, your prepositions.

Be aware of how you use them because they can be really tricky.

Take care and see you soon, Ben!~
~~Teacher Erine~~

I would buy tickets to a concert.

>>Correct.

Maybe, most of men are not different from me.

>>Maybe, most men are not different from me.

(Do you mean: Most men are the same as you are?)

In my case, i don\'t like buy unpractical things.

>>In my case, I don\'t like buying unpractical/impractical things.

I could have a diverse experience and being inspired from the concert such as what i\'ve seen instead of buying jewerly.

>>I could have a diverse experience and be inspired by the concert such as what I\'ve seen instead of buying jewelry.

As time goes by, many experience make people more wise and a man of desert.

>>As time goes by, many experiences make people wiser and a man of desert.(*What do you mean by \"desert\"?)
A piece of jewelry is also important factor during the life in some point.

>>A piece of jewelry is also an important factor in some point of our lives.

but those value come from its feature of unique. and, That\'s all.

>>But the value comes from its feature of being unique and that\'s all.

It can be a form an attractive souvinier of event just for a moment.

>>It can be a form of an attractive souvenir in an even for just a moment.

It cannot influence on our mind.

>>It cannot influence our mind.

It couldn\'t change how to think about all things which we\'ve got experience.

>>It couldn\'t change how we think about things which we get from experiences.
Human is animal of society.

>>Human is an animal of the society.

or>>Humans are an essential part of the society.

We compare with other people necessarily in terms of money, social class or vanity.

>>We compare our money, social class, vanities with other people.

But, If you have a ceratin attitude of life for yourselves from discipline sort of watching the concert or reading a book,

>>But if you have a certain attitude in life like having a discipline while watching a concert of reading a book,

You will live happier than any other people.

>>you will live happier than any other people.