homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The goals are necessary to achieve success.
Goals are very important.
We have to have a goal to success.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom!
I absolutely agree with you!
Goals are really important.
What are your short and long term goals?
Can you please tell it later in class.
I am sure that you are really focused in studying to become a Biologist.
Keep up the good work. See you!
Teacher Nina
The goals are necessary to achieve success.
>> Goals are necessary to achieve success.Goals are very important.
>> Correct
>> OR: Goals are significant.We have to have a goal to success.
>> Did you mean: We need to have goals to be successful.>> OR: We need to focus on our goals to be successful.
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