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2014-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The goals are necessary to achieve success. Goals are very important. We have to have a goal to success.

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Hello there Tom! I absolutely agree with you! Goals are really important. What are your short and long term goals? Can you please tell it later in class. I am sure that you are really focused in studying to become a Biologist. Keep up the good work. See you! Teacher Nina   The goals are necessary to achieve success. >> Goals are necessary to achieve success.Goals are very important. >> Correct >> OR: Goals are significant.We have to have a goal to success. >> Did you mean: We need to have goals to be successful.>> OR: We need to focus on our goals to be successful.

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