Homework:)!!

2014-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Does progress result only from struggle and conflict? I don't think progress result only from struggle and conflict. And it might be sad if progress result only from struggle and conflict. Seen from my experience, process also happens when I do something well. For example, I had to present in many classes and of course, sometimes I screwed up my presentation though I had prepared hard. Also sometimes I did really well even I thought myself perfect. kkk When I present well, I feel proud of myself and make resolution to do well next time again. And trying to do well next time makes me work hard and I think that's the point that progress happens. Strangely, the words, struggle and conflict, sound exhausting to me. Bye:)

강사 첨삭

Wow! Nice to see your homework, [이름]! It has been awhile since I saw your name here ;) Progress results from various factors, not only those~ However, it can also say that progress emerges from failures. Thanks and see you! I don\'t think progress result only from struggle and conflict. >>I don\'t think progress results only from struggle and conflict. And it might be sad if progress result only from struggle and conflict. >>Furthermore, it might be sad if it exclusively results from the factors mentioned. Seen from my experience, process also happens when I do something well. >>Seen from my experience, progress also happens when I do something well.  For example, I had to present in many classes and of course, sometimes I screwed up my presentation though I had prepared hard. >>CORRECT!  Also sometimes I did really well even I thought myself perfect. kkk >>Also, sometimes, I really did well that I even thought of myself as perfect. Ha! Ha!  When I present well, I feel proud of myself and make resolution to do well next time again. >> When I present well, I feel proud of myself and make a resolution to do well next time. And trying to do well next time makes me work hard and I think that\'s the point that progress happens. >>And trying to do well next time makes me work hard and I think that\'s the point when progress happens. Strangely, the words, struggle and conflict, sound exhausting to me. >>Strangely, the words struggle and conflict sound exhausting to me. Bye:) >>CORRECT!

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