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This is my script.The limit 1000 I am searching for a job which is adequate to me. the business field I want to work in is a trade sector. I am majoring russian language and took some lessons for spanish. I can't speak these languages perfectly, but I want these things to be strong point to get a job and be useful for my work. I imagine myself working with foreign buyers and hope to live somewhere outside of Korea. Though you can make decision on purely economic grounds, buying a computer is often more like joining a religious cult. Buy an Apple, for example, and almost by default you join Apple chairman Steve Jobs in his crusade against IBM. Every machine has its "users' groups" and a band of loyal enthusiasts who tout its merits. That makes it all the more difficult for the uninitiated to decide what machine to buy. Students have a huge advantage, however. The computer companies are so eager for students' business (it builds "brand loyalty") that many offer huge discounts. In th

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