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My favorite Holiday is the lunar New Year's day. When I was young, I waited that the lunar New Year's day was coming. At that time, relatives came our home, we could have tasty food with 'tteokguk', and I got cash gifts from adults after bowing to them. After marriage, I have gone to my in-laws' house for Lunar New Year. Even though not feel as much as my young ages, I am still excited at the lunar New Year's day.

  Hi there Jaime ^^   Holidays are really special days since it\'s a time to rest and have fun. It\'s also a time to make up for the things that we never got to do in the past. You did a great job here Jaime but be careful with your verb tenses.   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   My favorite Holiday is the lunar New Year\'s day. >> CORRECT OR> Lunar New Year\'s day is my favorite holiday. When I was young, I waited that the lunar New Year\'s day was coming. >> When I was young, I waited for the lunar New Year\'s day to come.  At that time, relatives came our home, we could have tasty food with \'tteokguk\', and I got cash gifts from adults after bowing to them. >> At that time, relatives come to our home, we could have tasty food with \'tteokguk\', and I get cash gifts from adults after bowing to them.  After marriage, I have gone to my in-laws\' house for Lunar New Year. >> CORRECT OR> When I got married, I spent Lunar New Year with my in-laws.  Even though not feel as much as my young ages, I am still excited at the lunar New Year\'s day. >>  Even though don\'t feel young as before, I am still excited for the lunar New Year\'s day.