Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday and hello weekend!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts Ms. [Name]!
We sometimes also have to spoil ourselves when we achieved something successfully.
Of course, for us to feel that we really did good.
And for us to motivate ourselves to do better next time.
It\'s another week to end Ms. [Name] so I hope that you will enjoy attending the wedding ceremony tomorrow.
Have fun and have a great weekend!
Keep safe!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How do you spoil (treat) yourself when you achieved something successfully?
When I achieved something successfully, I am really happy.
>> correct!
>> or: When I have achieved something successfully, I am really happy.
I think that the feeling, happiness is best present for me at that time.
>> I think that the feeling of happiness is the best present for me at that time.
I don\'t spoild myself special things but I just enjoy it together.
>> I do not spoil myself with special things but I also enjoy it.
Sometime I stand treat for my family or friends.
>> I sometimes treat my family or friends.
It\'s my pleasure.
>> correct!
I know that there is thier assistance behind my success.
>> correct!
Sometime when I do something such as diet and exam, I have a condition.
>> Sometimes, when I have to do something like going on a diet or passing the exam, I always have a condition.
When I achieve purpose weight or great score, I spoil myself with present such as new clothes, bag and so on.
>> When I have achieved my weight or a great score, I spoil myself with presents such as new clothes, bags, and so on.
If I slim due to diet, I can wear more beautiful things.
>> If I become slim because of my diet, I can wear more beautiful things.
It is like a carrot and stick for me.
>> It is like a carrot and a stick for me.
Times really flies during this week.
>> correct!
Especially, there is wedding ceremony every weekend in May.
>> Especially that there are wedding ceremonies every weekend this May.
I\'d like to enjoy this month. Thank you. Have a great weekend. Take care always.
correct!
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