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2014-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Walter is always of school on wednesday afternoon. It is thawing Starts at school 7:30 Our rabbit sleeps in a hutch My mother never goes to football games. I'll buy a new salt water fishes or corals. The named of coral is Glove polyp. It mixed green and white characteristics. ^^

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Good day Tom! It\'s the end of the line again! Thank God it\'s Friday!!! Wow! Really? I am sure that you are really excited for it. I am just curious, why did you chose that name? You can tell it to me in class. See you! Please go over the corrections I provided for you. Teacher Nina   1. Walter is always of school on wednesday afternoon. >> Walter is always at school on Wednesday afternoon. ( Be careful with your preposition and capitalization of words. ^^)2. It is thawing >> Correct3. Starts at school 7:30 >> School starts at 7:30.4. Our rabbit sleeps in a hutch >> Correct (Don\'t forget the usage of punctuation marks.^^ ) 5. My mother never goes to football games.>> CorrectI\'ll buy a new salt water fishes or corals. >> I\'ll buy new salt water fishes or corals. The named of coral is Glove polyp. >> Correct >> OR: I will name the coral Glove polyp.It mixed green and white characteristics. ^^ >> It has white characteristics and mixed with green.

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