Homework :)

Hi [이름]!

Awesome Friday!

Most people really find their beds as their best place or favorite place.

I am one of them.

You are one of us, too.

I really agree that you can enjoy many things on bed.

I also do those things that you do when I am in my bedroom.

However, the best thing for me to do on my bed is eating while watching a movie.

I really like that.

Anyway, I like your composition.

You made me remember to have my me-time.

Have a great weekend!

See you soon!

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

My relaxing place is my room.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: The place where I find my place to relax is my room.

Especially, I really like to be on my bed.

>> Most especially because I really like to be on my bed.

>> OR: The place where I find my place to relax is my room, especially because I really like to be on my bed.

It\'s a little bit big than other single bed and I\'ve been used it since seven.

>> It\'s a little bit bigger than other single beds, and I\'ve been using it since seven.

I alway use my bed when I\'m doing something like homework, drawing, and reading books, etc...

>> I always use my bed when I\'m doing something like homework, drawing, reading books, etc.

>> OR: ... and so on.

It\'s my best place to be calm and pleasant.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: It\'s my best place to have calm and pleasant mind.

The best time is when I play with my laptop on the bed eating some snacks!

>> CORRECT!