Homework
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Hi Chelsea.
It's beautiful weekend.
Do you have enjoying your weekend?
I'm sorry for doing late my homework. :(
Anyway homework's topic is "What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV?"
I think most advantages of watching TV is being know new news for another place. It is important Because in the 21st century is the information age. so to know is better, such as entertainers, fashion ETC.
However Some people think that TV is foolish box. because too much to watching TV is waste time. I heared "Time is Gold"
So I also don't watching TV. kkk
It's almost approaching summer. Be careful cold.
Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework even though it\'s late^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points!
See you tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea. >> CORRECT^^It\'s beautiful weekend.>> It\'s a beautiful weekend.Do you have enjoying your weekend?>> Did you enjoy your weekend?I\'m sorry for doing late my homework. :(>> I\'m sorry for doing my homework late. :(Anyway homework\'s topic is \"What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV?\">> Anyway, my homework\'s topic is \"What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV?\"I think most advantages of watching TV is being know new news for another place.
>> I think the biggest advanatge of watching TV is being aware on what\'s happening in another country.
It is important Because in the 21st century is the information age. so to know is better, such as entertainers, fashion ETC.>> It is important because 21st century is the information age such as entertainers, fashions and etc.However Some people think that TV is foolish box. because too much to watching TV is waste time. I heared \"Time is Gold\">> However, some people think that TV is a foolish box because to much watching TC is wasting time. I heard that \"Time is gold.\"So I also don\'t watching TV. kkk>> So I also don\'t watch TV. KkkIt\'s almost approaching summer.
>> It\'s almost summer.
Be careful cold.>> Be careful and don\'t catch a cold.Bye~
>> CORRECT^^
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