Homework.

2014-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi there. This topic is "What can people do to stop cyberbullying?" I think cyberbullying is necesaary Evil. The cyberbullying is another look of the people. People doing free expression in Cyber world also come out this cyberbullying naturally. So, I think that to stop the cyberbullying make result that can't do free expression with cyber people. But I think that control of cyberbullying need to. What about your think? Enjoy your happy weekend with smile~ Bye. See you on Monday.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points. Please try to explain your answer to me more on our class tomorrow. Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi there.>> CORRECT^^This topic is \"What can people do to stop cyberbullying?\">> CORRECT^^I think cyberbullying is necesaary Evil.>> I think vyerbullying is evil.The cyberbullying is another look of the people. >> Cyberbullying is looking at another people. (What do you mean?) People doing free expression in Cyber world also come out this cyberbullying naturally. >> People expressing harsh idean in cyber worls also comes out as a natural cyberbullying.So, I think that to stop the cyberbullying make result that can\'t do free expression with cyber people.>> So, I think to stop cyberbullying is to stop expressing harsh ideas to other people.But I think that control of cyberbullying need to.>> But I think controlling is what we need.What about your think?>> What do you think?Enjoy your happy weekend with smile~>> CORRECT^^Bye. See you on Monday. >> CORRECT^^

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