Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.
This topic is "What can people do to stop cyberbullying?"
I think cyberbullying is necesaary Evil.
The cyberbullying is another look of the people. People doing free expression in Cyber world also come out this cyberbullying naturally.
So, I think that to stop the cyberbullying make result that can't do free expression with cyber people.
But I think that control of cyberbullying need to.
What about your think?
Enjoy your happy weekend with smile~
Bye. See you on Monday.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
Please try to explain your answer to me more on our class tomorrow.
Have a great day and take care^^
~T.Chelsea
Hi there.>> CORRECT^^This topic is \"What can people do to stop cyberbullying?\">> CORRECT^^I think cyberbullying is necesaary Evil.>> I think vyerbullying is evil.The cyberbullying is another look of the people.
>> Cyberbullying is looking at another people. (What do you mean?)
People doing free expression in Cyber world also come out this cyberbullying naturally.
>> People expressing harsh idean in cyber worls also comes out as a natural cyberbullying.So, I think that to stop the cyberbullying make result that can\'t do free expression with cyber people.>> So, I think to stop cyberbullying is to stop expressing harsh ideas to other people.But I think that control of cyberbullying need to.>> But I think controlling is what we need.What about your think?>> What do you think?Enjoy your happy weekend with smile~>> CORRECT^^Bye. See you on Monday.
>> CORRECT^^
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