Homework:)

ESSAY: Do newspapers, magazines, television, radio, movies, the Internet, and other media determine what is important to most people? In some cases, Yes!! Newspapers, magazines, television, radio, movies, the Internet are the major sources that we can get information, so what these media deliver influences what we think important. However there are also some people who see information that only suits their opinion. In this case, no matter what media say he or she will adhere to his/ her view. Furthermore how one's close people think affects one's thought. In fact, I think this is the most influential one that affects one's opinion.

Hello there, [이름]! Happy Monday! How do you feel that you are going to start a wonderful week again? Do not fret about this day, think positive^^ Thanks for sharing your opinion about this topic^^ Anyways, kindly review some rules on punctuation marks as well as capitalization. We need a comma when we use transitional devices (however, on the other hand, therefore, etc.) and when we separate clauses in our sentences.  I can not wait to hear your voice again! ESSAY: Do newspapers, magazines, television, radio, movies, the Internet, and other media determine what is important to most people?In some cases, Yes!! >>In some cases, yes they do!!Newspapers, magazines, television, radio, movies, the Internet are the major sources that we can get information, so what these media deliver influences what we think important. >>Newspapers, magazines, television, radio, movies and the Internet are the major sources that we can get information from, so what these media deliver influences what we think of as important. However there are also some people who see information that only suits their opinion. >>However, there are also some people who see information that only suits their opinion. >>On the other hand, there are also some people who look for information that only suits their opinion. In this case, no matter what media say he or she will adhere to his/ her view. >>In this case, no matter what media say, he or she will adhere to his/ her view. Furthermore how one\'s close people think affects one\'s thought. >>Furthermore, the closeness or familiarity of people among themselves affects one another.  In fact, I think this is the most influential one that affects one\'s opinion. >>CORRECT!