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Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about our topic.

Well, I agree that if we share our secrets, we can be healed.
Our burdens are enlightened.

But there are still some secrets which can be kept even up to the grave if it could harm or destroy someone or something.

Anyway, thanks for today.

Hope you are still having a good day.
See you again!

Take care!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

Weather is nice today.

>>  The weather is nice today.

 It\'s sunny and wind is cool.

>>  It\'s sunny and the wind is cool.

My favorite day is Wednesday and I feel tired on Monday.

>>  correct!

I\'d like to be happy everyday.
>>  correct!

 If you told me all of your secrets, would I be shocked?

I don\'t have specially secrets so if I tell you all of my secreats, you won\'t be shocked.

>> I don\'t have any special secrets so if I will tell you all my secrets, you will be shocked.

Am I unpleasant person? Hahaha.

>>  Am I an unpleasant person? Hahaha.

However I don\'t want to have shocking secrets.

>>  correct! 

Movie or book need big and serious secret because it can be intersting and get popular.

>> In a movie or a book, there should be  a big and serious secret because it has to be interesting and popular.

Therefore it is really shocking.

>>  correct! 

Audiences alos want to watch more shocking secrets such as crime, birth, murder. and so on.

>>  The audience also wants to watch more shocking secrets such as crime, birth, murder and so on.

Actually, I have a secret but I can share with my husband, friends, family and you.

>>  Actually, I have a secret but I can share it with my husband, friends, family and you.

When we share our secret, we can be healed.

>>  correct!

Aha! my TOEIC score is shocking so my husband sometime remind me of it.

>>  Aha! my TOEIC score is shocking so my husband sometimes reminds me of it.

 I have to study English hard. Thank you.

>>   correct!