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I'm sad when I feel about my parents growing older.
They should live longer than me.
I want to live together forever.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Tom!
A wonderful Monday to you!
Thank you for sending an essay today.
You did a fantastic job!
I definitely agree with you.
I also want my parents to be with me forever.
We should always show them how much we love them.
Can\'t wait to talk to you in class. See you!Teacher Nina
I\'m sad when I feel about my parents growing older.
>> Did you mean: I\'m sad when I feel that my parents are getting older.
>> OR: I feel sad when my parents are becoming old. They should live longer than me.
>> Correct!I want to live together forever.
>> Did you mean: I want to live with them together forever.
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