homework :)
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Hi Chelsea. Good evening.
I'm doing my homework at home with my cat. kk
Anyway today's topic is "What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them?"
I think... Actually I can't remember any countries because I want to take a trip on all of countries.
I have a lot of countries that I don't visit yet. so I'm interesting all of countries. There are new culture, other people and another thinks.
I want to see the world. so I don't want to have any prejudices with any countries.
One day, I will go to trip all of the world. It is my hope. kk
Anyway Good night. Chelsea.
See you tomorrow. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good Morning Luke!
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
See you later!
Rise and Shine!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea. Good evening.>> CORRECT^^I\'m doing my homework at home with my cat. kk>> CORRECT^^Anyway today\'s topic is \"What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them?\">> CORRECT^^I think... Actually I can\'t remember any countries because I want to take a trip on all of countries.>> I actually don\'t have a specific country in mind because I want to have a trip to all countries.I have a lot of countries that I don\'t visit yet. so I\'m interesting all of countries.
>> I haven\'t been to a lot of countries yet, so I\'m interested to all countries.
There are new culture, other people and another thinks. >> There are new cultures, other people and other opinions.I want to see the world. so I don\'t want to have any prejudices with any countries.>> I want to see the world, so I don\'t want to have any prejudice with any countries.One day, I will go to trip all of the world.
>> One day, I will go on a trip all around the world.
It is my hope. kk>> That\'s my goal. Kkk.Anyway Good night. Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^See you tomorrow. Bye.
>> CORRECT^^
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