Homework:)
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: What has been the happiest day of your life so far?
Well, I think I could not pick one day of my life and call it the happiest day. I'v had good memories since I was a child. However since the last year, I started feeling good when I take a walk with my mother around my neighborhood. Actually I usually take a stroll with my mother only when I have no homework to do, so I can feel more relaxed taking a stroll around my neighborhood. As we walk, sometimes we eat Chinese pancakes in the street and sometime we go to supermarkets or clothes shops wherever I'd like to go. Maybe this is only a small part of my life but this is the one that makes me happy in my routine days. :)!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Are you feeling better now?
I hope your report is as magnificent as you are!
Thanks for your homework and see you!
I am so happy you can spend time with your mom~
Unfortunately, I can not do the same anymore T^T
See you tomorrow!
ESSAY: What has been the happiest day of your life so far?Well, I think I could not pick one day of my life and call it the happiest day.
>>CORRECT!
I\'v had good memories since I was a child.
>>I\'ve had good memories since I was a child.
However since the last year, I started feeling good when I take a walk with my mother around my neighborhood.
>> However since last year, I started feeling good when I take a walk with my mother around my neighborhood.
Actually I usually take a stroll with my mother only when I have no homework to do, so I can feel more relaxed taking a stroll around my neighborhood.
>>Actually I usually stroll with my mother only when I have no homework to do, so I can feel more relaxed around my neighborhood.
As we walk, sometimes we eat Chinese pancakes in the street and sometime we go to supermarkets or clothes shops wherever I\'d like to go.
>>As we walk, sometimes we eat Chinese pancakes on the street and go to supermarkets, boutiques or wherever I\'d like to go.
Maybe this is only a small part of my life but this is the one that makes me happy in my routine days. :)!!
>>CORRECT!
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