homework
학생이 쓴 원문
These are important.
Because, they make fresh air.
And it is home for many living things.
We must take care of trees.
강사 첨삭
A superb day to you Tom!
Happy second day of the week!
Thank you for allotting some time to do your homework.
I am so proud of you. It\'s nice that you know how trees are important.
Your sentences are doing great! You are using new expressions these days. Keep it up!
Do you plant trees or plants in school?
Do you think it is good to cut trees to make furnitures, houses or papers?
Share your ideas more in class. See you!
Teacher Nina
These are important.
>> Correct
>> OR: Trees are important. Because, they make fresh air.
>> Better: Because they make the air fresh.And it is home for many living things.
>> Did you mean: And it serves as a home for many living things. We must take care of trees.
>> We must take good care of the trees.
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