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2014-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you were an English teacher, what would you do to improve your students' English? The purpose will be different depending on grade. The aim of elementary English education is interest and attention. Therefore there are a lot of program such as sing, game, role play and chant. I was an English teacher two years ago. I like teaching English. I enjoy with my student. The key expression in the text book is very simple like stand up, sit down. Students learned it with game, song and so on. However, my teaching style change when I have to teach six grade. They had to memorise words and main sentences because there was small test like quiz. If they got great score, I gave candy and snack them. They look happy. Although I'm homeroom teacher now, I'd like to teach English again. Sometime knowledge and teaching is different. Although I'm not good speaker in English, I believe that I can teach it well. I have to learn English hard. Thank you. I go to play volleyball:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for today\'s class.

Well, all I can say is that you are still a good and effective English teacher.

Basing from what you have shared about your experiences as an English teacher, I can say that you did a pretty good job!

And I do hope that you will continue teaching English to your students.


Anyway, have a great time today!

Take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


If you were an English teacher, what would you do to improve your students\' English?


 The purpose will be different depending on grade.

>>  The purpose will be different depending on the grade.

The aim of elementary English education is interest and attention.

>>  correct!

Therefore there are a lot of program such as sing, game, role play and chant.

>>  Therefore there are a lot of programs such as songs, games, role plays, and chants.

I was an English teacher two years ago.

>>  correct!

I like teaching English.

>>  correct!

I enjoy with my student.

>>  I enjoy teaching it to my students.

>> or: I enjoy teaching my student.

The key expression in the text book is very simple like stand up, sit down.

>>  correct!

Students learned it with game, song and so on.

>>  Students can learn it with games, songs, and so on.

However, my teaching style change when I have to teach six grade.

>>  However, my teaching style has changed when I have to teach the six grade.

They had to memorise words and main sentences because there was small test like quiz.

>>  They had to memorize words and main sentences because there is a small test like a quiz.

If they got great score, I gave candy and snack them.

>>  correct!

>> or: If they get a great score, I will

They look happy.

>>  correct!

Although I\'m homeroom teacher now, I\'d like to teach English again.

>>  Although I\'m a homeroom teacher now, I\'d still like to teach English again.

Sometime knowledge and teaching is different.

>>  correct! 

Although I\'m not good speaker in English, I believe that I can teach it well.

>>  Although I\'m not a good English speaker,  I believe that I can teach it well.

I have to learn English hard. Thank you.

>>  correct!

I go to play volleyball:)

>>  I will go out and play volleyball.

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