homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon and happy Wednesday Tom!
Thank you for sending this in today.
Really? Oh! I am surprised about that.
Please tell me more about this amazing story later in class.
You did a nice job again! I encourage you to keep on sending an essay.
And also try to make your essays longer in order for you to polish your grammar and writing skills.
You can do it. See you!
Teacher Nina
I like all kinds of Christmas tree.
>> Correct!
And there is a amazing true story about Christmas tree.
>> And there is an amazing true story about Christmas tree.
Christmas tree is from Korea\'s tree named Korean fir
>> Correct!
>> OR: Christmas tree is from a tree in Korea called Korea fir. ( Can you please tell me more about this information in class? ^^)
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