Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.
It's sleepy afternoon today.
I'm almost asleep while i'm doing this homework.
I need a cup of coffe more. kk
Anyway homework's topic is "Is education necessary for modern progress?"
I think it is very important because some people who have high education in their life get promotion faster than didn't have it people in their companies.
We can't judge him with the amount of completed education. But companies still want to people who completed high education in school.
So i will also enter the graduate school in next year.
The company life seems like a war. There are a lot of competitions.
Anyway let we meet tomorrow and talk more.
Bye Chelsea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
Yeah, I kinda agree with you! Yesterday was a sleepy day.
Anyway, see you tomorrow.
~T.Chelsea
Hi there.
>> CORRECT^^It\'s sleepy afternoon today.>> It\'s a sleepy afternoon today.I\'m almost asleep while i\'m doing this homework.
>> I almost fell asleep while doing this homework.I need a cup of coffe more. kk>> I need another cup of coffee. KkkAnyway homework\'s topic is \"Is education necessary for modern progress?\">> CORRECT^^I think it is very important because some people who have high education in their life get promotion faster than didn\'t have it people in their companies.>> I think it is very important because some people who have high educational attainment get promotes faster than those people who don\'t have.We can\'t judge him with the amount of completed education. But companies still want to people who completed high education in school.>> We can\'t judge him base on his educational background but many companies stll want people who have a high educational attainment.So i will also enter the graduate school in next year.
>> So, I will also enroll in a graduate school next year.The company life seems like a war. >> Working life is like a war.
There are a lot of competitions.>> CORRECT^^
>> You have a lot of competitors.Anyway let we meet tomorrow and talk more.
>> Anyway, let\'s meet and talk more about this tomorrow.Bye Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^
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