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2014-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. I have a question. "What's up?" meaning is "Hellow", right? Are close people only use this word? If i say "What's up?" to my boss in the office morning, Is it impolite? kkk Anyway today's topic is "How will your study of English contribute to your career plans?" I have been working in global company for a year. While I was working there, I realize that some people have not fluent in English is difficult to get promotion because we must have to report work to global boss. And other companies also require a global conversation skill. If i attended a interview for enter company, first of all, the intervier ask me "Do you have a global conversation skill?". That is true. OTL... Anyway, I have to doing my report until tonight, so i will finish our talk. See you tomorrow. Bye ~

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ Don\'t forget your capatalization! See you tomorrow^^ Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^I have a question. >> CORRECT^^\"What\'s up?\" meaning is \"Hellow\", right?>> Is the meaning of \"what\'s up?\" is \"Hello\"?Are close people only use this word?>> Do close people only use this phrase?If i say \"What\'s up?\" to my boss in the office morning, Is it impolite?kkk>> If I say \"what\'s up?\" to my boss in the morning, is it impolite? Kkk.Anyway today\'s topic is \"How will your study of English contribute to your career plans?\">> CORRECT^^I have been working in global company for a year. >> I have been working in a global company for a year now. While I was working there, I realize that some people have not fluent in English is difficult to get promotion because we must have to report work to global boss.>> I have been working here for a year now, and I realize that people who are not fluent in English have a difficulty getting promoted because we have to report to our global boss.And other companies also require a global conversation skill.>> And other companies also require a global conversation skills.If i attended a interview for enter company, first of all, the intervier ask me \"Do you have a global conversation skill?\". That is true. OTL...>> If I attended an interview, first, the interviewer will ask me \"Do you have a global conversation skill?\". That\'s tru.Anyway, I have to doing my report until tonight, so i will finish our talk.>> Anyway, I have to my report until tonight, so I will finish this now.See you tomorrow. Bye ~ >> CORRECT^^

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