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2014-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Janice

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I joined first class tonight. I'm happy to talk to you. Thank you for helping me. Have a good day~~ see you tomorrow.... 1. I went go to the gym. 2. Matthew and michelle moved to the dining room. 3. Allan left your keys __on____ the table. 4. Dr. [Name] apologized for interrupting us and told us to carry __out____ with our discussion. 5. I walk ___in___ the amusement park. 6. Pat drove Mike ___in___ the airport. 7. Glenn almost fell ___down___ the river. 8. The waitress noticed that there was no more Diet Pepsi ___in the___ Marty's glass. 9. [이름] and Sarah took the bus that was heading ___to___ the university. 10. Mary Sue jumped ___up___ the stage and danced.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir Andrew!   Me too, I was very greatful that you are my student. I enjoyed our first day of class together. I am looking forward to having more talks with you. Teacher will do everything to help you attain our goal-For you to imporve your English skills.   Anyhow, please go over the corrections made below.   See you again in class! Take care! Have a rest! Goodnight! Teacher Janice   I joined first class tonight. >> Correct  I\'m happy to talk to you. Thank you for helping me. >> Correct  Have a good day~~ see you tomorrow....>> Have a good day! See you tomorrow.1. I went go to the gym.>> Correct  2. Matthew and michelle moved to the dining room.>> Matthew and Michelle moved the table into the dining room.3. Allan left your keys __on____ the table.>> Correct  4. Dr. [Name] apologized for interrupting us and told us to carry __out____ with our discussion.>> Dr. [Name] apologized for interrupting us and told us to carry on with our discussion.5. I walk ___in___ the amusement park.>> I walk to the amusement park.6. Pat drove Mike ___in___ the airport.>> Pat drove Mike to the airport.7. Glenn almost fell ___down___ the river.>> Glenn almost fell in / into the river.8. The waitress noticed that there was no more Diet Pepsi ___in the___ Marty\'s glass.>> The waitress noticed that there was no more Diet Pepsi in Marty\'s glass.9. [이름] and Sarah took the bus that was heading ___to___ the university.>> [이름] and Sarah took the bus that was heading toward the university.10. Mary Sue jumped ___up___ the stage and danced. >> Mary Sue jumped on / onto the stage and danced.

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