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2019-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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HOMEWORK: Correct the following sentences: 1. The God has created universe : The universe was created by the God. 2. The gold is precious metal. : Gold is such a precious metal. 3. Kalidasa is Shakespeare of India. : The book called ‘Kalidasa’ is Shakespears of the India. 4. This is best book I have ever read. : This is the best book I have ever read. 5. Cat killed rat. : A cat killed a rat. 6. Cat is on roof. : A cat is on the roof. 7. Mahatma Gandhi was great leader of India. : Mahatma Gandhi was a great leader in India. 8. The stone hit me on head. : The stone hits me on head. 9. John is smallest boy in the class but Peter is biggest. : John is the smallest boy in the class but Peter is the biggest. 10. I would like to buy pair of stockings and couple of shirts. : I would like to buy pairs of stocking and couple of shirt.

강사 첨삭

Wow, nice job, [이름]!!!
Continue to practice learning English because I can say that you\'re really good.  Keep it up!!!
If you consciously learned one new thing a day, over time it would become a way of life for you. Just continue gaining knowledge from your day to day activities in life.
See you tomorrow!!!
T.Jeny


HOMEWORK: Correct the following sentences:
1. The God has created universe
: The universe was created by the God.
>>God has created the universe.
2. The gold is precious metal.
: Gold is such a precious metal.
>>correct
3. Kalidasa is Shakespeare of India.
: The book called ‘Kalidasa’ is Shakespears of the India.
>>Kalidasa is the Shakespeare of India.
4. This is best book I have ever read.
: This is the best book I have ever read.
>>correct
5. Cat killed rat.
: A cat killed a rat.
>>correct

OR>>The cat killed the rat.
 6. Cat is on roof.
: A cat is on the roof.
>>correct
7. Mahatma Gandhi was great leader of India.
: Mahatma Gandhi was a great leader in India.

>>correct
OR>>Mahatma Gandhi was a great leader of India.
8. The stone hit me on head.
: The stone hits me on head.
>>The stone hit me on the head.
9. John is smallest boy in the class but Peter is biggest.
: John is the smallest boy in the class but Peter is the biggest.
>>correct
 10. I would like to buy pair of stockings and couple of shirts.
: I would like to buy pairs of stocking and couple of shirt.

>>I would like to buy a pair of stockings and a couple of shirts. 

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