Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday and happy weekend to you Ms. [Name]!
I hope that whatever you are going to do this weekend, you are going to enjoy it.
Tell me more about it on Monday.
Well, personal credo or philosophy in life is like our foundation in life.
It is like our motto in life where we could be inspired in everything that we are doing because of it.
It gives us courage because of the words of wisdom that it has on our life.
Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts about it.
See you next time!
Take care a bunch!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What is your personal credo or philosophy in life?
I think that personal credo and philosophy is important.
>> correct!
However it is not simple because our life is very various.
>> However it is not simple because our life is very complicated.
There are a lof of roles such as daughter, wife, sister and so on.
>> correct!
Sight of view is different depending on the people.
>> Point of view is different depending on the people.
I\'m a christian so I found it in the bible.
>> correct!
I\'d like to be pleasure of God.
>> I\'d like to give pleasure to God.
Therefore, I try to be indispensable person anywhere, anytime and whoever.
>> Therefore, I am trying to be an indispensable person anytime and anywhere.
It is not easy.
>> correct!
When I was young, I studied hard.
>> correct!
I have lived diligently.
>> correct!
But my thought have changed a little so far.
>> correct!
It will be changed continually.
>> correct!
I don\'t want to live for only future.
>> correct!
I\'d like to enjoy now and look around.
>> correct!
I\'ll go together.
>> It will go together.
>> or: It has to go together.
Thesedays I think that community is important.
>> correct!
We have to live together and I\'d like to share food, money, feeling, thinking and so on.
>> correct!
When we live like that, our life will be more fruitful.
>> correct!
Personal credo is changing because of time.
>> correct!
I will grow up and mature. Thank you.
>> I will grow up and be matured. Thank you.
Have a nice weekend.
>> correct!
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