Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Good afternoon!
Well, I think you misunderstood what I mean in the question.
I think that you should just have stick to your weakness.
What weakness or limitation is it?
And do you want to remove it in your life?
But thanks for sharing about the things that you want to change in your life.
Anyway, have a great time and see you!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could eliminate one weakness or limitation in your life, what would it be?
All of people have a lot of weakness.
>> All people have a lot of weaknesses.
They try to overcome it.
>> correct!
>> or: They are trying to overcome it.
If I can eliminate my weakness or limitation, I don\'t want to throw it away but I just want to change it.
>> correct!
First of all, I will change to my appearance.
>> First of all, I will change my appearance.
I want that my face will be small and my body will be slim.
>> correct!
Actually, I can get a prastic surgery and do a diet but it give me pain. Hahaha.
>> Actually, I can get a plastic surgery and have a diet but it gives me pain. Hahaha.
People have to be old and die.
>> People have to get old and die.
We can just have 24 hours a day.
>> We only have 24 hours a day.
I\'d like to have a healthy body and enough time.
>> correct!
I want to do many things like swimming, aerobic, badminton and so on.
>> I want to do many things like swimming, doing aerobics, playing badminton, and so on.
I\'ll be worn out and time is not enough.
>> correct!
Actually, money is not enough, too.
>> correct!
Is it beside beside the point?
>> Are the points side by side?
My answer seem to has error. kkk.
>> My answer seems to have an error. kkk
Today\'s topic is difficult. Sorry.
>> correct!
Have a nice day. Thank you.
>> correct!
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